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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: I like this poem.. Fri May 22, 2009 5:37 pm | |
| Roses are red Violets are blue sugar is sweet and so are you
But the roses are wilted The violets are dead The sugar bowl empty And my wrists are stained red
Roses are black Violets are blue And all of this is Just for you
But the roses are fake The violets die While i sit and take All your pretty lies
Roses are red Violets are blue I know exactly What you do
But the roses were killed the violets died I can't believe that I believed your lies
Roses are dead Violets are blue I have three words reserved for you
The roses never alive The violets lives are through I want you to know That I love you
ganda ng poem, i just thought that maybe some of you guys might like it..
gusto ko to of course.. hehe
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` A wet rainy day Lost in the gray
A rip in the seams Holding broken dreams
Crying for light In this infinite night
Standing alone No place to call home
The hurts comes again Surrounds from within
No place to run The cold leaves you numb
Nothing out there An empty nightmare
Quietly waiting Silently hating
The rythym of rain Why is life so insane?
Is life so worthless? Does death serve a purpose?
Or is it all in vain? Like tears lost in the rain...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ If distance makes the heart grow fonder,
then let it keep our hearts from wander.
Make me strong and build thyself,
fix thy faults and lift mine health.
Thy actions strange and not of old,
for what is meant may be foretold.
Look deeper to the fold of reason,
betwixt the mode that makes our treason.
Help me see what hurt I bear to thee,
for love and life with you I see.
Within thyself, an instrument of gold,
most dear to me, myself, you hold.
'Tis what you seek, and I of you.
Make this your heart and key to true
love and freedom from our woes of fear.
For you, my love, I hold most dear. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~` At first when we met We said hi
Now we're still friends But we've said goodbye
I gave you a chance And you rejected
You said it's not good right now And you stand corrected
You see what you've lost At least I hope you do
You see what others can have But not you
I don't mean to sound conceited Or vain in any way
I'm just merely pointing out What you had, and threw away
I liked you a lot I honestly did
But did you feel the same? Were there feelings you hid?
If you had feelings for me You didn't show it
Because things are over now And I didn't know it
If you didn't have feelings Then why did you say so
When the only person you trust, lies Then where do you go?
I just wanted to say Thought you needed to know
These feelings I have Need to be let go (this was the story of someone i knew) No ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Consumed by fear Blinded by pain Nothing to offer But this feeling of blame Many things were said And few were done Trusted by all Misguided by one Alone in this world As the people pass by With the look of agony And tears in their eyes Swallowed by hate Forgetting your love Paying this debt While you rest above Sometimes hearing What sounds like your voice A constant reminder It was always my choice Days pass me by As the pain grew strong Still your love is here My life seems so long Consumed by fear Blinded by pain Nothing to offer But this feeling of blame
(it took me at least a week to make this..)
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Fri May 22, 2009 7:50 pm | |
| i'll be sarcastic, i hate that poem. | |
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: sarcastic, huh? Fri May 22, 2009 8:03 pm | |
| so what does dat mean?
do you like the poem? or do you not like the poem? hehe..
nalito lang ako sa word "sarcastic".. i thought about it too deeply.. hehe
gawan ko pa ng site or blog ang mga poems na ginawa ko or mga gusto ko lang.. | |
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Fri May 22, 2009 8:17 pm | |
| sar·cas·tic [saar kástik] adjective 1. mocking: characterized by words that mean the opposite of what they seem to say and are intended to mock or deride 2. fond of sarcasm: fond of or habitually using sarcasm
-sar·cast·ic·al·ly, adverb Word Key: Synonyms sarcastic, ironic, sardonic, satirical, caustic, CORE MEANING: used to describe remarks that are designed to hurt or mock sarcastic characterized by words that mean the opposite of what they seem to say and are intended to mock or deride; She cared little for his sarcastic jokes. As a politician, he is eloquent and sometimes bitingly sarcastic.ironic deliberately stating the opposite of the truth, usually with the intention of being amusing; The nickname Charles the Bald may not have been descriptive but ironic, implying Charles was exceptionally hairy. songs bristling with ironic observation and vivid imagerysardonic disdainfully or cynically mocking; a sardonic smile He gradually evolved into a more polished politician - his sardonic humor emerged, his views became more refined.satirical using wit, especially irony, sarcasm, and ridicule, to criticize faults, particularly in the arts or politics; a satirical TV show He was a sharp, satirical observer of the social scene.caustic very sarcastic and intended to mock, offend, or belittle somebody; a barrage of caustic editorials His caustic style made him the most controversial broadcaster of his time.
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: aw..encarta? Fri May 22, 2009 9:12 pm | |
| Lamat nlang sa info, pero alam ko man kung ano ang sarcastic, malalim lang talaga maxado ang naisip ko eh..
hehe.. | |
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: wait.. Fri May 22, 2009 9:13 pm | |
| may nakalagay.. mocking..
(no comment) | |
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Fri May 22, 2009 11:02 pm | |
| - Yanz wrote:
- may nakalagay.. mocking..
(no comment) meron ba? | |
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: mocking? Sun May 24, 2009 1:54 pm | |
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lalalabanana Imperator
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Sun May 24, 2009 3:04 pm | |
| - Yanz wrote:
- Roses are red
Violets are blue sugar is sweet and so are you
But the roses are wilted The violets are dead The sugar bowl empty And my wrists are stained red
Roses are black Violets are blue And all of this is Just for you
But the roses are fake The violets die While i sit and take All your pretty lies
Roses are red Violets are blue I know exactly What you do
But the roses were killed the violets died I can't believe that I believed your lies
Roses are dead Violets are blue I have three words reserved for you
The roses never alive The violets lives are through I want you to know That I love you
ganda ng poem, i just thought that maybe some of you guys might like it..
gusto ko to of course.. hehe cool poem :]] | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: Poem.. Sun May 24, 2009 3:38 pm | |
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mysterious_13 Grade 1
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Sun May 24, 2009 7:22 pm | |
| so.....to whom is it for? | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: Poem.. Sun May 24, 2009 8:09 pm | |
| ohh.. umm.. i didn't make it.. nakita ko lang toh sa net.. ito ang source ng mga nagawa ko na poem.. well, mostly.. hehe..
may iba pa ako na i-post na poems.. so, everyone pls. keep commenting sa mga poems an i-post ko, lamat ^^ | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: Another Poem I Like.. Sun May 24, 2009 8:53 pm | |
| A wet rainy day Lost in the gray
A rip in the seams Holding broken dreams
Crying for light In this infinite night
Standing alone No place to call home
The hurts comes again Surrounds from within
No place to run The cold leaves you numb
Nothing out there An empty nightmare
Quietly waiting Silently hating
The rythym of rain Why is life so insane?
Is life so worthless? Does death serve a purpose?
Or is it all in vain? Like tears lost in the rain... | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: Strange emo poem.. really weird.. pls. comment on this.. Sun May 24, 2009 9:01 pm | |
| If distance makes the heart grow fonder,
then let it keep our hearts from wander.
Make me strong and build thyself,
fix thy faults and lift mine health.
Thy actions strange and not of old,
for what is meant may be foretold.
Look deeper to the fold of reason,
betwixt the mode that makes our treason.
Help me see what hurt I bear to thee,
for love and life with you I see.
Within thyself, an instrument of gold,
most dear to me, myself, you hold.
'Tis what you seek, and I of you.
Make this your heart and key to true
love and freedom from our woes of fear.
For you, my love, I hold most dear. | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: Goodbye Sun May 24, 2009 9:12 pm | |
| At first when we met We said hi Now we're still friends But we've said goodbye I gave you a chance And you rejected You said it's not good right now And you stand corrected You see what you've lost At least I hope you do You see what others can have But not you I don't mean to sound conceited Or vain in any way I'm just merely pointing out What you had, and threw away I liked you a lot I honestly did But did you feel the same? Were there feelings you hid? If you had feelings for me You didn't show it Because things are over now And I didn't know it If you didn't have feelings Then why did you say so When the only person you trust, lies Then where do you go? I just wanted to say Thought you needed to know These feelings I have Need to be let go (this was the story of someone i knew) | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: Nahirapan ako gawin toh.. Sun May 24, 2009 9:25 pm | |
| Consumed by fear Blinded by pain Nothing to offer But this feeling of blame Many things were said And few were done Trusted by all Misguided by one Alone in this world As the people pass by With the look of agony And tears in their eyes Swallowed by hate Forgetting your love Paying this debt While you rest above Sometimes hearing What sounds like your voice A constant reminder It was always my choice Days pass me by As the pain grew strong Still your love is here My life seems so long Consumed by fear Blinded by pain Nothing to offer But this feeling of blame
(it took me at least a week to make this..) | |
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Yanz Grade 2
Warnings : Posts : 50 Points : 5568 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2009-05-19 Age : 28 Location : General Santos City
| Subject: The Poems I Posted.. Sun May 24, 2009 9:28 pm | |
| Please comment on the poems i posted..
please..it tired me to recall these.. | |
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UltimaZeRo Imperator
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Sun May 24, 2009 11:14 pm | |
| Just make an effing blog.so that we can share blogs!.like me and edward.^^ | |
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Mon May 25, 2009 7:36 am | |
| woah. double post times triple post equals to six post in a row........ edit them and combine them in one post and you'll be good for now. | |
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: Blogs.. Mon May 25, 2009 9:52 am | |
| Ala ako blog.. indi ako marunong gawa.. if i try to make one, i end up deleting it.. kapoi man gud..
isa pah, i barely update any of the blogs i made.. | |
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: Combine.. Mon May 25, 2009 10:00 am | |
| Ed, indi ako marunong mag combine. Too many buttons, malibog ako.. indi ko alam kung ano gawin..
sori.. hehe | |
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Mon May 25, 2009 12:23 pm | |
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Mon May 25, 2009 12:26 pm | |
| di ko nlang idedelete.... | |
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Yanz Grade 2
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| Subject: DELETE? Mon May 25, 2009 12:33 pm | |
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Wazzy Executor
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| Subject: Re: I like this poem.. Mon May 25, 2009 12:35 pm | |
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