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PostSubject: I like this poem..   Fri May 22, 2009 5:37 pm

Roses are red
Violets are blue
sugar is sweet
and so are you

But the roses are wilted
The violets are dead
The sugar bowl empty
And my wrists are stained red


Roses are black
Violets are blue
And all of this is
Just for you

But the roses are fake
The violets die
While i sit and take
All your pretty lies

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I know exactly
What you do

But the roses were killed
the violets died
I can't believe that
I believed your lies

Roses are dead
Violets are blue
I have three words
reserved for you

The roses never alive
The violets lives are through
I want you to know
That I love you



ganda ng poem, i just thought that maybe some of you guys might like it..

gusto ko to of course.. hehe

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
A wet rainy day
Lost in the gray

A rip in the seams
Holding broken dreams

Crying for light
In this infinite night

Standing alone
No place to call home

The hurts comes again
Surrounds from within

No place to run
The cold leaves you numb

Nothing out there
An empty nightmare

Quietly waiting
Silently hating

The rythym of rain
Why is life so insane?

Is life so worthless?
Does death serve a purpose?

Or is it all in vain?
Like tears lost in the rain...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
If distance makes the heart grow fonder,

then let it keep our hearts from wander.

Make me strong and build thyself,

fix thy faults and lift mine health.

Thy actions strange and not of old,

for what is meant may be foretold.

Look deeper to the fold of reason,

betwixt the mode that makes our treason.

Help me see what hurt I bear to thee,

for love and life with you I see.

Within thyself, an instrument of gold,

most dear to me, myself, you hold.

'Tis what you seek, and I of you.

Make this your heart and key to true

love and freedom from our woes of fear.

For you, my love, I hold most dear.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`
At first when we met
We said hi

Now we're still friends
But we've said goodbye

I gave you a chance
And you rejected

You said it's not good right now
And you stand corrected

You see what you've lost
At least I hope you do

You see what others can have
But not you

I don't mean to sound conceited
Or vain in any way

I'm just merely pointing out
What you had, and threw away

I liked you a lot
I honestly did

But did you feel the same?
Were there feelings you hid?

If you had feelings for me
You didn't show it

Because things are over now
And I didn't know it

If you didn't have feelings
Then why did you say so

When the only person you trust, lies
Then where do you go?

I just wanted to say
Thought you needed to know

These feelings I have
Need to be let go
(this was the story of someone i knew) No
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Consumed by fear
Blinded by pain
Nothing to offer
But this feeling of blame
Many things were said
And few were done
Trusted by all
Misguided by one
Alone in this world
As the people pass by
With the look of agony
And tears in their eyes
Swallowed by hate
Forgetting your love
Paying this debt
While you rest above
Sometimes hearing
What sounds like your voice
A constant reminder
It was always my choice
Days pass me by
As the pain grew strong
Still your love is here
My life seems so long
Consumed by fear
Blinded by pain
Nothing to offer
But this feeling of blame

(it took me at least a week to make this..)




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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Fri May 22, 2009 7:50 pm

i'll be sarcastic, i hate that poem.
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PostSubject: sarcastic, huh?   Fri May 22, 2009 8:03 pm

so what does dat mean?

do you like the poem? or do you not like the poem? hehe..

nalito lang ako sa word "sarcastic".. i thought about it too deeply.. hehe

gawan ko pa ng site or blog ang mga poems na ginawa ko or mga gusto ko lang..
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Fri May 22, 2009 8:17 pm

sar·cas·tic [saar kástik]
adjective
1. mocking: characterized by words that mean the opposite of what they seem to say and are intended to mock or deride
2. fond of sarcasm: fond of or habitually using sarcasm



-sar·cast·ic·al·ly, adverb
Word Key: Synonyms
sarcastic, ironic, sardonic, satirical, caustic,
CORE MEANING: used to describe remarks that are designed to hurt or mock
sarcastic characterized by words that mean the opposite of what they seem to say and are intended to mock or deride;
She cared little for his sarcastic jokes.
As a politician, he is eloquent and sometimes bitingly sarcastic.ironic deliberately stating the opposite of the truth, usually with the intention of being amusing;
The nickname Charles the Bald may not have been descriptive but ironic, implying Charles was exceptionally hairy.
songs bristling with ironic observation and vivid imagerysardonic disdainfully or cynically mocking;
a sardonic smile
He gradually evolved into a more polished politician - his sardonic humor emerged, his views became more refined.satirical using wit, especially irony, sarcasm, and ridicule, to criticize faults, particularly in the arts or politics;
a satirical TV show
He was a sharp, satirical observer of the social scene.caustic very sarcastic and intended to mock, offend, or belittle somebody;
a barrage of caustic editorials
His caustic style made him the most controversial broadcaster of his time.

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PostSubject: aw..encarta?   Fri May 22, 2009 9:12 pm

Lamat nlang sa info, pero alam ko man kung ano ang sarcastic, malalim lang talaga maxado ang naisip ko eh..

hehe..
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PostSubject: wait..   Fri May 22, 2009 9:13 pm

may nakalagay.. mocking..

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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Fri May 22, 2009 11:02 pm

Yanz wrote:
may nakalagay.. mocking..

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meron ba?
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PostSubject: mocking?   Sun May 24, 2009 1:54 pm

ala naman.. hehe
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Sun May 24, 2009 3:04 pm

Yanz wrote:
Roses are red
Violets are blue
sugar is sweet
and so are you

But the roses are wilted
The violets are dead
The sugar bowl empty
And my wrists are stained red


Roses are black
Violets are blue
And all of this is
Just for you

But the roses are fake
The violets die
While i sit and take
All your pretty lies

Roses are red
Violets are blue
I know exactly
What you do

But the roses were killed
the violets died
I can't believe that
I believed your lies

Roses are dead
Violets are blue
I have three words
reserved for you

The roses never alive
The violets lives are through
I want you to know
That I love you



ganda ng poem, i just thought that maybe some of you guys might like it..

gusto ko to of course.. hehe


cool poem :]]
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PostSubject: Poem..   Sun May 24, 2009 3:38 pm

lamat sa comment ^^
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Sun May 24, 2009 7:22 pm

so.....to whom is it for?
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PostSubject: Poem..   Sun May 24, 2009 8:09 pm

ohh.. umm.. i didn't make it.. nakita ko lang toh sa net.. ito ang source ng mga nagawa ko na poem.. well, mostly.. hehe..

may iba pa ako na i-post na poems.. so, everyone pls. keep commenting sa mga poems an i-post ko, lamat ^^
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PostSubject: Another Poem I Like..   Sun May 24, 2009 8:53 pm

A wet rainy day
Lost in the gray

A rip in the seams
Holding broken dreams

Crying for light
In this infinite night

Standing alone
No place to call home

The hurts comes again
Surrounds from within

No place to run
The cold leaves you numb

Nothing out there
An empty nightmare

Quietly waiting
Silently hating

The rythym of rain
Why is life so insane?

Is life so worthless?
Does death serve a purpose?

Or is it all in vain?
Like tears lost in the rain...
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PostSubject: Strange emo poem.. really weird.. pls. comment on this..   Sun May 24, 2009 9:01 pm

If distance makes the heart grow fonder,

then let it keep our hearts from wander.

Make me strong and build thyself,

fix thy faults and lift mine health.

Thy actions strange and not of old,

for what is meant may be foretold.

Look deeper to the fold of reason,

betwixt the mode that makes our treason.

Help me see what hurt I bear to thee,

for love and life with you I see.

Within thyself, an instrument of gold,

most dear to me, myself, you hold.

'Tis what you seek, and I of you.

Make this your heart and key to true

love and freedom from our woes of fear.

For you, my love, I hold most dear.
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PostSubject: Goodbye   Sun May 24, 2009 9:12 pm

At first when we met
We said hi

Now we're still friends
But we've said goodbye

I gave you a chance
And you rejected

You said it's not good right now
And you stand corrected

You see what you've lost
At least I hope you do

You see what others can have
But not you

I don't mean to sound conceited
Or vain in any way

I'm just merely pointing out
What you had, and threw away

I liked you a lot
I honestly did

But did you feel the same?
Were there feelings you hid?

If you had feelings for me
You didn't show it

Because things are over now
And I didn't know it

If you didn't have feelings
Then why did you say so

When the only person you trust, lies
Then where do you go?

I just wanted to say
Thought you needed to know

These feelings I have
Need to be let go


(this was the story of someone i knew) No
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PostSubject: Nahirapan ako gawin toh..   Sun May 24, 2009 9:25 pm

Consumed by fear
Blinded by pain
Nothing to offer
But this feeling of blame
Many things were said
And few were done
Trusted by all
Misguided by one
Alone in this world
As the people pass by
With the look of agony
And tears in their eyes
Swallowed by hate
Forgetting your love
Paying this debt
While you rest above
Sometimes hearing
What sounds like your voice
A constant reminder
It was always my choice
Days pass me by
As the pain grew strong
Still your love is here
My life seems so long
Consumed by fear
Blinded by pain
Nothing to offer
But this feeling of blame

(it took me at least a week to make this..)
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PostSubject: The Poems I Posted..   Sun May 24, 2009 9:28 pm

Please comment on the poems i posted..

please..it tired me to recall these..
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Sun May 24, 2009 11:14 pm

Just make an effing blog.so that we can share blogs!.like me and edward.^^
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Mon May 25, 2009 7:36 am

woah. double post times triple post equals to six post in a row........

edit them and combine them in one post and you'll be good for now. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Blogs..   Mon May 25, 2009 9:52 am

Ala ako blog.. indi ako marunong gawa.. if i try to make one, i end up deleting it.. kapoi man gud..

isa pah, i barely update any of the blogs i made..
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PostSubject: Combine..   Mon May 25, 2009 10:00 am

Ed, indi ako marunong mag combine. Too many buttons, malibog ako.. indi ko alam kung ano gawin..

sori.. hehe
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Mon May 25, 2009 12:23 pm

hmmm, i will do it then
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Mon May 25, 2009 12:26 pm

di ko nlang idedelete....
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PostSubject: DELETE?   Mon May 25, 2009 12:33 pm

lamat nlang ed..
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PostSubject: Re: I like this poem..   Mon May 25, 2009 12:35 pm

no problem

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